All Comments on 'Oil Can'

That's the dumbest, most unerotic thing I've ever read. "Member"? Sounds like something a 14-year old fanfiction writer says.

"When he thought her middle extremities had gotten enough"

You need to look up the definition of "Extremities."

56 repetitions of "Oil can" and I'm in a coma.

This whole thing came to me from talking to myself while stopped at a traffic light when driving to work a few years ago, and I'm always surprised anyone likes it.

It was certainly a creative idea. Not War and peace but fun to read!

Very nicely put, if may say so.

Good writing, that.

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Cute little game, there, Thee, but when she posed and declared "Oil Can," I thought she was giving him directions.

I enjoyed this story tremendously. Well Done! Erotic and humorous. I loved it!

How tragic.

I don't remember reading any of your other stories but this was a very sexy story although just a little weird, in a good way.