by LargoKitt
Liked the story very much but I think she should come back and forth just for him.! Gave you a "5" and wish I could give you a "10".!*
Thanks. JAG
Interesting story, nice to see someone using the English language correctly. But just for info, there's no such bra size as Double C.
I really liked your story, especially the ending. I found it very well written and it really aroused me. I look forward to reading more of your work.
One hellova read and a great story line. At least she wasn't a mermaid but another well built water species. Keep writing and we'll keep reading, good luck with the next one, ciao.
Excellent story and the presentation was even even better. Different. Wonderful. A few changes in the delivery and ... wow.
Thank you.
One of the most remarkable stories I've read on Literotica. Haunting, loving. The world feels like a better place. Please write more.
A fantastic, well written story in so many ways. Could not ever have guessed the ending! Keep writing!
A very good story, very well written and paced, with a superb ending that really was a bonus after the main action was over. A fishy, dishy treat.
*****Great piece of storytelling told by a fine storyteller. Thanks for sharing.