by McMitchell
First posts are the worst...for the author. Julie is poorly developed and hard to believe. It's unlikely a 50 year old woman who has never done this before would by lying there naked with a freakin' vibrator in her puss. And if she was that kind, you need to either let us in on it from the beginning somehow, or give us something afterwards that makes sense. This just didn't make sense.
Write another story, then another, then another. After you have 4 or 5 done, go back and read the first one and see if it is something YOU would like to read. Hint: it's going to look like someone else wrote it and that someone else wasn't all that good. Bit by bit the old stuff will start to look better and you're on your way. Good luck with it.
Fuck you critics _ I liked his story.
How about some positive feedback assholes!
A very well written story except the part of her being naked in bed wiwth a dildo to start the evening out. A more prolonged work up with disrobing and kissing etc would have made this good story into a killer. Keep writting.
Waste of my time since old folks are not sexy. No one is interested in some old hide except someone that can't attract someone young and pretty. As soon as I read they are over 50, I stopped reading and rated it 1*.
I happen to think life starts at fifty, just sayin.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
Excellent story.. I appreciate how the author kept hubby there and I volved I'm the process ... 5 stars
Nice hot story, 5*. At my 30th HS reunion (just shy of 48yo) , I had a great time with two of my old boyfriends and one other guy I always wanted to jump my bones. Oh, yeah DW's wife and I went down on one another.