All Comments on 'Old World Magic Ch. 06'

Chapter 6 is by far the hottest one you posted so far. I hate waiting for each chapter write faster! lol

did we need to learn how the brothel makes money or the girls work schedule?

Looking forward top the next chapter. I particularly like when he messes with unsuspecting people.

Thank you ghesta, I appreciate that you're a loyal fan of my work. :)

Anon 1 : Maybe you do, maybe you don't... keep reading.

Anon 2 : I already posted chapter 7, it's pending moderator approval. :)

...the excruciating detail about how the brothel is run. Even if some of it becomes pertinent in later chapters, it was just too much all at once. By the end of that section, I halfway expected you to include a list of the account numbers used on their P&L Statement!

-Rei