All Comments on 'Olive's Anal Ordeal'

by bubblearseman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Memories!!

I use to see a preachers wife and I've lived out all these encounters with her!!! Wish I could live them out again!!! Please continue your story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I would have gave it four stars...

... But I was unable, too. Panther fan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Zero stars

For absolute drivel

Pyr0LitPyr0Litabout 9 years ago
Love your stories

Hope you write many more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Unrealistic

If you are going to blackmail someone for free sex and you want to CONTINUE to get that free sex, you wouldn't do anything to endanger that. The shoes, the clothes and the open curtains are foolish and would be more than stupid in real life. Good storyline and good idea but try to make it believable....

bubblearsemanbubblearsemanabout 9 years agoAuthor
unrealistic?

Look anonymous,It's not supposed to be realistic . . . It's FANTASY!

merrySMmerrySMabout 9 years ago
great story, wouldn't let me vote

Love the pace, would like a few more details on her feelings of shame and humiliation, also how stretched she feels, etc. Keep writing.

merrySMmerrySMover 7 years ago
Mrs Sweetstuff

This is such a fun and hot story. Please continue to write. Your style is wonderful. Ignore the haters.

Wished I could have voted.

Tyler_Durden20Tyler_Durden20over 7 years ago
Great Story!

I really like your style bubblearseman. Do write some more about Olive.

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