by bubblearseman
I use to see a preachers wife and I've lived out all these encounters with her!!! Wish I could live them out again!!! Please continue your story!!!
If you are going to blackmail someone for free sex and you want to CONTINUE to get that free sex, you wouldn't do anything to endanger that. The shoes, the clothes and the open curtains are foolish and would be more than stupid in real life. Good storyline and good idea but try to make it believable....
Look anonymous,It's not supposed to be realistic . . . It's FANTASY!
Love the pace, would like a few more details on her feelings of shame and humiliation, also how stretched she feels, etc. Keep writing.
This is such a fun and hot story. Please continue to write. Your style is wonderful. Ignore the haters.
Wished I could have voted.
I really like your style bubblearseman. Do write some more about Olive.