All Comments on 'Olivia Ch. 05'

I've been hoping you'd continue this series. Thoroughly enjoyed this installment. The writing was very good, and the story of her continued downfall, cementing in her mind what she's become, was very erotic. Can't wait to see where you take this tale.

That serie is great, the last 4 chapters were absolutely crazy and this new unexpected turn of event can let a lot of things happen next!

What could be great? if Olivia regained conscious about her life and has shame again, and then was forced again to fuck her dad employees or whoever she knows, but without them knowing who she is... humiliation, prostitution, and so many degradations to make her endure! :)

Thanks dude!

I really think that the new master shouldn't keep Olivia and return her back to her dad

methinks,some aching desire of the writer to be a part of the flesh trade industry got badly screwed up in the past!!;))hence the poor thing's extensive selling of female slaves a dominant part of this story of his and several others!! ;))

Can you please continue this somehow? :)

For various reasons, you should continue the story. How can this be the end. The heroine is merely surviving. She cannot be so dumb to not try to figure out a escape angle. This last guy is asking for trouble!

Another thing. The heroine character should not be mute. We should know more what she is thinking. Do you think it would be that easy for her to adapt without everyday being a nightmare of sadness, terror, boredom and anxiety? Revive her character and redeem her!

There is much of this story yet to be told.

Is this really the end of this story?

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