All Comments on 'Olivia: The Tutor'

Love the development of the story. Noticed an inconsistency, though. "For one thing, it was the second Saturday that I came sans thong, pussy baby bare." Then, hardly fifteen minutes (?) later, " I quickly developed a fast growing wet spot in my panties and slacks."

Excellent, though I ran into the same speedbump (pantys or bare) in the story. You need to check them one last time before submitting. Remember to read every word like you have never seen the story before. Loved the plot and style.

In addition to the no panties vs. panties inconsistency all ready pointed out, I noticed several spelling, punctuation, grammatical, and etc. errors that probably would have been caught had you used a decent spelling and grammar checker to scan your writing before you submitted it. Unfortunately, you aren’t alone in making these easily avoided errors. The vast majority of the submissions to "Literotica" that I have read contain many more such errors than the ones I noticed in your otherwise well-written story.

You are a good storyteller. Keep on writing.

That was a great story that you wrote about Sam and his tutor. I love how his mother went looking for a tutor for him to help them with the art of seduction with a woman. I love how the story became more part of seduction and how his sister became a part of the story to.

Fabulous! This is an excellent read. I delighted in your use of the language, taking the time to build characters and motivation; and then plunging down into beautifully articulate filth! Suburb.

Very good! Enjoyed it!

Loved the story!

does she keep calling him by name? Does she think he has forgotten his name or does she think maybe there is some one else in the room and she must make certain is the one to whom she is referring?

than most of the stories or so-called stories on this site.

average, nothing to write home about