All Comments on 'Olivia's Hypnotic Confession Ch. 05'

On yea, more plese. It's hitting all the right spots for me, is it hate? Is it lust? Is it more? She's also pretty badass, Caleb seems at first glance a douche and a half, but is there more under what he wants the world to see? How their chemistry works together is explosive, your pacing is delightful, want is such an exquisite thing and I fully enjoy teasing it out. So looking forward to the next chapter. (I giggled towards the end because I may or may not have threatened to kick an asshole's teeth down their throat myself)

Keep it going!!! It’s funny, you used the names Olivia and Caleb. These are the names used for the main protagonists in a book trilogy called captive in the dark. I have to say these names really suit your characters as well! Keep writing!!!

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