All Comments on 'Olympic Bet Ch. 01'

Very good writing from Legsfeettoes. I loved at the end, when Pam comes in and acts as if nothing was happened. Can't wait for CH 2.

Love where this is going. Looking foreword to more.

Love to see his punishment!

Not a bad start. But this little one page thing is not good for a sustained audience. Personally, I feel even two or three pages are nothing but a stroke story. I know many people like that, but many people also have a short attention span. These same people, namely guys, last about a minute and don't satisfy their partner. Sex, in actuality or in a story, should last a while. Otherwise, nice story. From her own 20 questions and the interview that one guy wrote, I think the real Silkstockings would enjoy this. I don't mean to discourage you. Keep trying. I think with some work you can be really good.

I'm sorry you think it's too short! Maybe you should wait until all chapters are complete before reading it. FYI, I obtained Jasmine's approval before I wrote this! I suspect she'll like it - specially the future chapters! Feel free to send me a private message letting me know your thoughts after all the chapters are done! Thanks for your comments, but it's obvious we approach things differently.