All Comments on 'Omaha Pt. 01'

I loved the way you used humiliation and degradation to subgate a strong woman and turn her into a very submissive bitch. I would like to thank you for the way you scripted the abuse so that it is almost like you actually feel like the reader is feeling every blow.

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This was great, loved the story and the sex was hot and nasty. Keep up the good work, Eager to hear more from those two.

Very hot and steamy

("Please, sir, don't stop!" I shouted. I pushed myself onto my side to face him.

"Why should I stop?")

*shouldn't

I've known a lot of women who like it rough.

You nailed the experience quite accurately.

Usually the bigger the ball buster in "real life" the more they want to be dominated in their private life.

Men are the same way. We know a few dominatrixes and they say that some of their biggest clients are men in positions of power or authority.