All Comments on 'Omega Pride Ch. 05'

wondefull, as allways

Truly I did. Gave it 5 stars. BUT… please get an editor. I appreciate that you tried to get the story posted asap but I would gladly wait another few days for a polished chapter. It is very distracting having to go back and re-read a sentence once or even twice to figure out what it is you are trying to say. A few misspellings (here when it was supposed to be hear), letters transposed, sometimes words in the sentence were missing altogether. These are the things that an editor would pick up on and make your work truly fantastic. But I really do love the story and am very much looking forward to Chapter 6!

I agree with the above poster about the editor.The story was very good but could have been great without the the small errors.The plot and actions are awesome 5'er.

Thank you for this chapter and hope to see the next one soon.

I'm constantly looking for the next chapter in this series only hours after I've finished the current one because I just can't wait to see what comes next. I love this story and I really appreaciate the great mysterious plot that goes along with the romance. It's what makes your story so different from a lot of other romance stories out there where the plot is almost an after thought. And I realize that there has been a lot of comments about an editor and I agree that there are some mistakes in spelling and grammar, but honestly this chapter has been much approved in that area so people should stop nit picking. I was just happy to get the next instalment!

Ahhh! I cannot get over how great this story is! I love it!

the chapter was very good and the story to date has been very entertaining thank you for posting and i am looking forward to the next chapter

v3

I love ur story so much that I bookmarked it on my phone and I check back everyday day to see if u have posted a new chapter. ^3^

Chapter 6 now, please! What was the guy? Is Delphi really Alpha material- she might be. You hinted she jumped a fence she should not have jumped. She took one hell of a beating before she was bested. Now, now, now - I plead. DW

Am loving this story - keep up the great work. I look forward to the next chapter & finding out what/who that dick who shot her was. I love Wyatt & Delphi.

omagaaahh!!! another cliffhanger! lol. thank you! this chapter made my day. even if it ended with much more questions in my head. :D

This chapter was great and I cannot wait for the next one.

That crazy cowboy is not dead, is he? Don't tell me he's a vampire, that would be cliche lol Thanks for updating!

Great story, I hope we can find out why the cowboy killed Delphi's family and how he found her now.

Love it!!! Def cant wait for the next chapter!!! :D

It's almost sad to think about how much of my time I use to see if you have posted a new chapter... Thank you for this amazing story!

just cannot wait for the next chapter

This is a great story. It sounds like there is more to Delphi's background than even she knows.

Delphi is not an omega , is she, the question is , what is she then, hope to see more soon

Delphi is so totally not just an omega! ( i think) i wonder what her pack didnt agree with though? Land maybe or something else?

love it keep it coming fast

I enjoyed this alot. I only can hope we'll find out others were involved in the destruction of her pack b/c I ant to know why he killed them. I was frustrated that he stopped before he told her that. I think it's important we know why her pack was killed since it is such a huge part of her life and who she is.

I loved how it was a gory kill Wyatt made :) That guy sure deserved it. I really hope she will now be open to their mating b/c he came for her and proved he loves her. Hopefully, it will help her open up and give him a chance to prove another pack can be a good place and that he can make her a good mate.

She definitely is not an omega as others said. She was able to push off his command. I don't hold hard feelings against his sister b/c I think she was right that she can't just step aside. But I think she will be challenged and will lose her spot to Delphi. I hope you'll give us a good reason why she'd be convinced she's an omega all this time. Why wouldn't her wolf have fought that. Was her fear so great it kept her from challenging others? I just think instinct would have taken over for the wolf and that it wouldn't have accepted being kept down. I look forward to the explanation.

I think you're doing an awesome job and I look forward to the next post. I hope you'll help us get to know Wyatt and Delphi more deeply so we see their personalities really come out.

This story just keeps getting better! Thank you Canis =) keep up the superb writing and can't wait for chapter 6!

Loving this series and can't wait for the next chapter

They just don't make characters like they used to and I'm sorry but I found our mysterious assassin absolutely hilarious. It's nice to see an antagonist that isn't cliche and has some genuinely funny lines. I am honestly a little sad the cowboy's gone. Keep it up, I look forward to reading

can't wait for the next chapter!

Luving it big time, can't wait 4 next chapter.....

You HAVE to hurry with the next installment. The wait is KILLING me! lol Fantastic story. I adore your characters and the development is well done!

OMFG!!!!!! Pleeeeeeease hurry with the next few chapters!!!!!!! I die a little bit inside every day I have to wait!!!!!!!!

SO SOON?????? PLEASE!!!!!!

I really can't wait for the next chapters of the story. Please hurry! PLEASE!!!!

amazing story! you describe delphis feelings and thought process so well, I fell so sad for her but hopefully Wyatt can make her happy

cant wait to read more

Please update soon, am honestly hanging out for the next chapter, read this one as soon as it was updated & have been checking daily for the next chapter. Love your work & don't want to rush you but I am loving this story.

A note to EVERYONE! Some asswhole on Mibba.com is using my story for themselves. Type in Omega Pride on the story search. If people can, do what ever is in your power to shut them down. I am putting this on all my stories as if it continues, I will more than likely be taking my stories off. Thank you all!

I made an account on mibba.com and reported it. Under the comments section on the report I put the link to this story. Hope this helps!

I never comment but I love your story please don"t let one person let you quit call them out and keep going please. I can't stand people that do ish like this. Sorry ass excuses that don't have an orginal bone in their body. To be inspired is one thing but to just steal somebody's work is low. Be orginal and get your own.

This what i posted on their site.

This story is by someone else they are copying her. This is her story not this person. Here is her site to the story.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1306159&page=submissions

We are behind u. Please dont stop writing because of this ass.

Like the above commenters, I both reported the story, and left a comment that included a link to your submissions page on Lit.

I really hope this doesn't make you stop writing. Though the spelling & grammar often bother me, the story is so interesting and strong that I find myself overlooking those issues (and trust me, that takes a lot because I am a definite grammar nerd). So keep writing. Please.

I've only just checked back to see if you had updated and you have and boy did I enjoy it.

Can't wait to read chapter 6 - I'm sure Wyatt is not going to let Delphi out of his sight now.

Saw your comment about the person on Mibba.com passing off your story as their own. I think you're the 2nd Lit author I've read today who has been plagarised like this on Mibba. Hope whoever it is gets outed big time and banned.

Anyway, keep up the good work!

I went to Mibba.com but I could not find the story so I am hoping that it means the person has been removed - I don't get why people do shit like that. Hope that you will continue the story on here.

I think we did it! I can't find the story at all on Mibba.com. Please don't take this down or not finish this.

I'd never even heard of Mibba.com until today, but I hope the situation with the stolen story is indeed resolved. I have to find out where it goes from here!

I know you are busy with school, work & then there has been that Mibba.com bullshit (hopefully we won because I could not find the copy cat on there) but I was wondering when we can expect another chapter?? - I check daily for updates :)

I really wanna say thank you to all you guys that helped me, and did what you could to remove that bugger from the site. I will let you know that I will be updating either this week or the next. Thank you all again, and there will be a lot more there that came from.

Thanks for the update Canis, I eagerly await the next installment, keep up the great work.

Please, please, please! I look every day! I have to know what happens!

I love the story! Keep up the good work!

i AM SO LOOKING FOWARD TO THE UPCOMING CHAPTER PLEASE PLEASE HURRY WITH IT!!!!!!

Please please let us know what happens next! Why did the bad guy want to kill her? And, is she really an omega after all? She has proven to be very resilient!

I hope you plan to updated soon. I really like how different this story is. Always keeps me guessing what Delphi will do next. She is one messed up chick, lol

hey great story with all the twists and turns, can't wait to see whay happens next!

this series is awesome and needs to be continued indefinately!!

Patiently awaiting more.

Pls update soon

Please update this soon! I haven't read anything this good in so long!

I really hope you plan on finishing this story. I hate it when authors don't finish what they started.

i really love this story. i like your different approach to a topic that has been so written about. i'm glad that you have decided to continue with this and am looking forward to chapter 6.

Please when are you going to write a new chapter or 3 chapters.. I am dying here!!!!!

Please update soon - I am dying to know what happens :)

More please... a great story so far, look forward to the next...chapters!

I love this story!! I need to read more!! I check everyday to see if you have written the next chapter. Please take me out of my misery!!

Love, love, love this story! I wish I could say that I am patiently awaiting the next chapter...but I'm not; I want the next chapter soon. Pretty please! Keep up the great work; you've got a gift!

not so patiently waiting for the next chapter - I love this story, its so different. I love these characters & want to know more. Please - pretty please - update soon :D

This is one weak ass chick. I thought it would get better as I read but she is a scared weakling and how the hell is ahe gonna be mated to an alpha as weak as she is. I have to say that this is one of the sorriest stories have read and I suggest that either you rewrite to make her a strong coming into herself woman or remove this story and try again. I wonder if the person you are claiming is copying your story on some other link is doing it better justice. I think I'll check it out and see.:-(

You are creating interesting characters that are more than expected. I eagerly await your revelation of Delphis true nature and ability, which is obviously more than the run of the mill Omega.

Thank you for sharing your imagination in this creative and well written story.

PS, Hope your new job is going well. Good Luck!

People can be so cruel sometimes. Its one thing to make constructive critism and another to be so cruel. If you don't like a story don't read it ,there is no need for you to leave nasty comments. This author had the courage to step up to write something then post it for us all to read. If you think you're such an authority on writing werewolves stories why don't you write something of your own. Don't be a hater! because only those who can't write ,criticise.

The only thing I can suggest for this whole story is that you really need an editor. Love the story. Dephi maybe be weak, but given the life she has led is it surprising?

Loving this story so far!!!!!

Really enjoying your story. You have got an interesting story going here, not your ordinary girl falls for guy, mate and all is happy, looking forward to more of the same.

I hope I am reading a completed storyline cuz I WILL BE PISSED waiting on you to finish. Sheeeiiittt you're pretty good. Your universe pal....I'm just a Peeping Tom passing through...

This was a thrilling story. Good job:)

Omg I Think Im In Love -

When a bad guy harms his girlfriend, a good werewolf boyfriend rips the dude's arm off and then bites his face off. I bet that hurt... briefly. I'm all in favor of that.