All Comments on 'Omelettes for Breakfast'

For me the problem is that the father has to be a blithering idiot.

A good story includes a sense of justice.

I loved the story but was sad that it was only one page. It's always a treat when a new MA story gets published and you can only hope that it's going to be a long one.

An interesting chapter would be to digress to the beginning and see how this trio began enjoying each other.

it would be great if we could 4-6 pages per Chapter, loved it so far

I love this story precisely because dad is clueless as to the incestuous shenanigans around him. It’s what he gets for being a corporate drone.

a little short - but Wow - very sexy. a great tease and great sex all rolled into 1. Fantastic!!! 5 stars.

That was a nice read.

Oh Mary, Mary, Mary. You naughty wench! I knew immediately what that special sauce would be. Being naughty myself I wondered if you were going to add special sauce to dad's omelette too. Would serve him right, as oblivious as he was to what was going on. And you're right, what considerate children. I'm left hoping that they get the special sauce directly from the source in the near future.

Perfect mix of slow build up and naughty sex. Really enjoyed it, thank you