All Comments on 'On a Busy Inner City Street'

A fair tale, but leaving a few questions. What happened to the guitars? Did the player get them back? Point being, why is this statement included in the tale? Missing guitars is a million dollar question, and band mates taking them doesn't satisfy the dilemma. It IS a great foreshadowing moment but it needs to be completed to make it whole.

The bartender knowing she lives across the street? That affirms the opening premise that she only has to cross the street. The points link.

Best I can tell, the guitars were stolen.

Enjoyed it a lot - thanks for posting.