All Comments on 'On a Dragon's Lips Ch. 03-04'

Thank you for the update!

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Is there anything I could do to make it better? Every little bit helps.

Thank you Solsgon..This has been an intriguing read..short chapters keep the suspense up however, personally..I'd wish they were at least 6 pages or more. That way, we get to read an entire story arc and not just bits n pieces, if you know what I mean. Keep up the good work though..look forward for more entertaining n intriguing chapters.

When the writing is this well done, longer chapters are very much appreciated. I'm glad to know you have much of the story already written. It's so discouraging to become emotionally invested in a story only to find the author is M.I.A. and the tale left incomplete. The late FinishTheDamnStory made it his mission, before he passed, to add conclusions to long abandoned works. JC_the_continuer has picked up the torch for our benefit. Thank you to all the writers here, past and present.