All Comments on 'On a Slippery Slope Ch. 01'

I look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing an obvious talent with us.

to long to learn what happens to Carla next. A very intriguing storyline! Fantastic sex with an element of danger is very arousing. Until Chapter 2 is printed, I will continue to re-read Chapter 1 over and over.

Hot, intense, erotic....just plain WOW. Well done. Now I'm off to read your other stories.

Amazing! I've never read something like this before... And it to has awakened a primal erge in me... 5 stars!! All the way😉

and quite a stunning one. I thought I had read every storyline possible -- but you've found an awesome new way in. Totally excellent. Outstanding.

Now you have to deliver more. You can't stop now...no, no, no.

Thanks for a great read. You've got the talent, the skill and the gift on every level possible Now it's time to take it to the next level. I'm waiting patiently. Take care.

this was nice!

Well done. Your words describe, explain, lead the reader on a journey of exploration in sexual desire. I'll be watchful of chapter 02.

Again, nicely done.

Loved the story, loved the sex, and loved the writing style. Among the very best I've ever read. Five stars! I'll be looking for Chapter 2.

I don't know how I missed this series. Beautifully done!

… really, really good. It takes such perfect aim at that deep but typically unmet desire to be "properly fucked" (even if it's just once in this life!). The story line is a home run. As fantasies go, this one starts out right up there on top for me, and you do it so skillfully. I like your writing style a lot -- clean, smooth, no distractions (grammatical), straightforward, just enough description, great timing, believable action! I like these characters. She's curious, adventurous, courageous. He's undaunted, skillful, thoughtful. I'm hooked! Great work, really. Thank you!

No, no, no. There is no way in hell she would be "intrigued." No woman in her right mind would be anything other than terrified. Way off base.

I can't believe I have six more chapters to read. This one was hot, hot hot!