All Comments on 'On Another World Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Finally!

Thanks for posting. I had just about given up on seeing an update.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great

It was worth the wait. Hope the next one doesn't take as long

anonymousssssanonymousssssover 13 years ago
A worthy continuance.

Keep it up!! I like everything about your series. And while waiting increases my appreciation of your work, try not to wait so long for the next one will ya? Thanks again!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
We want another one!!!

Hey! really cool story, we want more chapters sooooon!!

glib24glib24about 13 years ago

I would like to see more soon! :D

slaybadslaybadalmost 13 years ago
Very interesting

However I saw one thing that bugged me. Seeing as there is a 10/1 ratio of women to men, why is the army still primarily male based? I would expect it to almost be reversed.

ushergalushergalover 12 years ago
I think he....

should have gone after the q-girls first rather than the wife because the gray dude said they were important didn't he?

Lord_JohnnyLord_Johnnyabout 8 years ago
Slaybad

Well, testosterone makes men have a higher upper body strength than women, which would be absolutely critical for any hand to hand engagement type. Not having men as the primary military gender is suicide on a grand scale. Also, given what this story has shaped up as, military service also seems to be a prestige environment. The women don't need prestige to be selected, but men would so they can choose the girls they want, opening up more options.

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