All Comments on 'On Fire for You'

Very HOT! I can feel the heat! :-)

I loved it. It's entirely realistic and I could imagine everything really happening. I especially loved everything the woman did in the story, from the beginning right through to the end. It's amazing to think afternightpersonality is capable of those things herself, because she thought them up ;)

You definitely set it up for a sequel, and it'd probably get you quite a few readers. You did a great job and I'd love to see what happens "tomorrow".