by econut
Great twist! Love the idea of earning the right to fuck his ex, great job!
Yes,oh yes,ohhh effen YES!!!,. i am so envious of Dale and so very much wanting to be..,well i would love being Sam and Laura's slut i can feel my own little clitty tingling in excitement..,on to chapter 3..💜
Premise OK.
Still too rushed.
Still too automatic.
Still lacks preliminaries/foreplay.
Three stars.
Won't read next chapter.
while stuck with it this far because I like Laura...BDSM is not something I generally read...I'm bailing...Sam's brutality draining.