All Comments on 'On the Backseat with Mom & Grandma'

I liked the story but you continually used the word "woman" instead of "women" when you talked about the mother and grandmother. For example, "Both woman stopped kissing and let out a sigh." It drove me nuts! Please get an editor or a proofreader!

Love the three-generational incest! A story that is need of a sequel or two, and I'd like to see a bit more of a back-story to build up the sexual tension a bit more, but over-all...Outstanding!

great story and one that can have many more chapters.

A tiny bit dry on the dialog but I wouldn't mind a second part

Really good story, would have loved it see more non-sex related storyline, but we understand that this particular story is meant to be heavy on the sex.

Overall a good story that could function with or without a sequel.

Thank you for delaying your brake to share this story with us,

Tanhors and family.

mom asked son that she wants to stop taking the pill

Definitely needs more chapters. So many open story lines to go with!

Gran is probably too old to get pregnant, but mom and sis are not! Next chapter should explain that mom got pregnant on this camping trip, and his sisters pregnancy soon followed. And what the hell. Go ahead and have grandma pop out a baby for her 60th birthday too!

A real crotch strangling story. A perfect intergenerational incest story, that could only be improved by including the sister/daughter/granddaughter. A massive orgy with all four would be awesome.

This story certainly needs more chapters.

I know someone has already made mention of the misuse of the words 'woman' and 'women'...but by now you could have gone back and edited this otherwise great story.

One WOMAN...two or more WOMEN.

excellent one, thanks.

You have great writing skills and always keep the reader never to stop reading until the story is finished. I am not perfect in writing but just ignore the people that always say typing is wrong, you always get better the more you do. So please keep the chapters coming and I will keep reading them.

You really made me believe father and grandfather non-FUCKING JERKS. I envy the son. He deserves everything he's getting. I would have liked it to!

have mom throw away her birth control pills and hide jenny's if she's on them

Needs an editor. Watch that comma splice (joining two sentences with a comma].

POOR NICK have to be in the back with two hot women having sex with him while the men have MAN time. WE need for his sister to join in and have her and mom not on pills, it would be nice he NICK won the lottery so he has the money to take care of them.

So far the most painful read that I have read here on Literotica. It's moronic at best.

Great story. Good build up and climax. Waiting for the next chapter.

...because the smell of sex in car is never going to be noticed!

Also, some of the worst dialogue EVER! "You sure you will be able to survive sitting in the back with those two woman, Nick? It's gonna be quite a trip until we reach the hotel where we will sleep for the night!"

I love BACKSEAT FUCKING.

Can't wait for his sister adding to the FUN

It is IMPOSSIBLE for a cock to even accidentally touch a WOMB, or a CERVIX, much less have some interaction with either of them.

The VAGINAL CANAL was deliberately designed by it's maker to go UNDER ALL OF THE OTHER SEX ORGANS, so there was no chance of hitting anything. We can safely assume that if there were any imperfections in that original design, then they were worked out over the next 270,000+ years.

Just for your information, EVERY PERSON ON EARTH TODAY, is traced back by DNA to one Black woman and one Black man, in AFRICA.

Now, get the womb and the cervix out of your stories because it didn't happen, no matter how many "AUTHORS OF FICTION" claim they do.

wthompson10@wildblue.net

I am so tired of these cowards (Anonymous) that criticize the Author's because they think something is unrealistic or not physically possible. ITS FICTION, ITS FANTASY, and IT's not YOUR story. The joy of being a fiction writer is you can create a world where ANYTHING is possible. Maybe in this Author's world everything he wrote works exactly like he says it did. In MY opinion its simply artistic license of the Author trying to convey to us the depths of the love and passion between these lovers, away to describe their bodies physical reaction to their emotional connection. What your ignorant ass see's as unreadable anatomical impossibilities I and I dare say most readers see as a beautiful or even lustful way to describe the love making of the family. So please get over yourself and enjoy this fictional fantasy taboo in the spirit in which it was meant to be.

To the Author : I enjoyed the story and many of your works. The one criticism I do offer you is this. See about getting an editor or double and even triple check your stories, you tend to leave words out or use the wrong tense at times, while it IS distracting its not bad enough to distract me from continuing to read. This is meant to help you grow as an Author not to discourage you.

Thank you for your works

Just friggin' loved your story as always

Great story as always. I especially liked the fast pace of it.

I hope you are writing part two soon, keep up the good work.

You should continue this with the 3 of them and his sister.

This story is one of the hottest stories i have ever read on this site. i hope that you will write part two soon.i want read more about their mischievous adventures

Would love to see the three and possibly Jenny building their own family.

Please......bring on sis

As a fellow author of several "Mom and son in backseat stories" I have to say this one was really hot. I see you haven't written in a while (Me neither, just don't have the time these days, maybe someday soon) but if you ever do write again, I would love another story like this one. Thanks this one really got me off checked a lot of the boxes that I look for.

Raises the level of erotica to a new height! Well done!

I've never written in this category, but i love to read in it. Incredibly enjoyable! Was stroking my cock the whole time. Looking forward to the next part

Not into the FF action. Makes the boy into a "toy". He'll learn sooner or later....

(8/27/2021)

This was a great read. There is no confusion here. A good guy versus the bad guys is clearly presented. The young man stepping up for his mum and grandmum, cuckolding his chauvinistic/misogynistic dad and granddad. Loved it. Also, nice FF, hope there's more in the second installment. IMO, any guy that doesn't get horny watching two women loving each other must be from "the other side". 5 stars, very well done.

Great story and loved the ending, especially hoping you would continue the story. Nice job of writing. Thank you

Long time since I read such a load of hogwash.

Ok you used the word incestuous way to much

Extremely unrealistic! Especially the stupid idea that 2 "macho, he man" guys would prefer sharing a room with each other, rather than their wives.

It can seem unrealistic but it worked for me and I liked it. It has the kind of stuff that I like. I prefer this kind of story to the more "realistic" ones in which the characters are mere fuck buddies that don't end up together because it wouldn't be "realistic". I also liked it because the other males didn't get involved. 5*.

Great wish you were still writing

One of the Best stories ive read so far (didnt cum as kept getting distracted, but if i hadnt i would definitely have) cant wait to read the next chapter which im about to do after writing this review.

Really...??!! You write a story like this, basically a masterpiece of incestuous love, and there is NON sequel??!! Not nice, my friend, not at all!!

A few grammatical and word usage errors, but overall, very, very exciting.

Now, where is Jenny??!! We DEFINITELY want to see her appearance in a story, her reaction to Mom and Gran's relationship with Nick...and her becoming a member of his 'harem'...maybe a couple of school friends, too...or an aunt/cousin...SO MANY OPTIONS HERE!!

Mark and Patrick...mindless boobs, rather drink beer and talk trash than be with their wives...Nick deals the benefits of that decision.

FIVE**5**STARS...💥💥💥💥💥🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋

Awesome story! Loved it and will be following you from now on.

Love the story. AAAAAA++++++

Great story! I enjoy the theme of backseat sly fucking and it's one of the best.

A great story. I wish I as Nick. I am more into thrusting from behind & shooting my load in their cervix walls. I would be foing a lot of poking & thrusting their pussies alot. Also I would demonstrate how my cock can dance in thier pussies. We would have a marathon fuck session.

worst story ...same sucking dick..show from women prospective sucking pussy..

nice erotica, a lot of places where it's supposed to be women instead of woman though

Wonderful, exquisite storytelling. So beautifully "composed". Perfect.

Nice!

Very hot story - thank you!

Remark: I have translated it and now there is a german version available (only for my private purpose...)

That was spectacular! I rubbed a few out over it and I’m still rubbing

Why would the husband's be sharing a room,instead of being with their wives?.

An interesting if not impossible scenario. Sex was great and very readable.That all of that could have taken place in the earshot of the husbands is pretty incredable.