All Comments on 'On the Balcony Ch. 01'

Nicely written. Love the unexpected-expected turn...can't wait to read Ch 2.

Great story! Can't wait to see what happens next.

I would love to be the one on the other balcony. We have been watched, but not from this close. Loved it.

Interesting story. I really like the idea of each couple serving as inspiration for the other. I would enjoy seeing where you go with this.

This one was one of my all time favorites under your old account. This is something my wife and I have done, minus the other people, so I've always enjoyed the story. Glad to see there might be a sequel. Hope it comes soon!

Yeah buddy, you've GOT to do chapter 2!

Chapter 2, 3. 4?

This desperately needs more chapters

When do we see the next chapter

Great story. I know it’s been a while but would like to read more.

I’m dying for chapter 2 please!!