All Comments on 'On The Beach'

I`d like to find that stretch of beach

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga

While this Author's story is certainly hot enough to give you a good read; what fascinated and intrigued me was the word-pictures created. This accented the flow of the story and made the characters even more interesting. Beautifully Written!

Use of the present tense is always tricky, and you pulled off.

Do write some more.