All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 01'

This story could just as well be called 'A day in the Life' of the main character. Arriving in Myrtle Beach he meanders through his day; meets a good looking blonde, catches some rays. Hey - not the worst way to spend the day. Enjoyable Read. Good Write!

Well written, but not erotic at all. Too short too. Hopefully, the next chapters will have more 'content'.

I just finished reading this series from start to finish.

It brought back many fomd memories of many women. Thank you.