All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
OMG - a great twist!

Dear T - I did enjoy this short installment. You could take it a lot further and I await the next instalment with some impatience! 5* x

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Unexpected

Hot story - awesome ending

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Life got awfully busy for a time. I hope to add a few stories again.

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