All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 09'

Fantastic story line, I love they way you are writing this story. Keep up the good work.

Kathi.....I love the way you have written this story. I live in Myrtle Beach and have admired women like Murphy from afar on many occasions...wondering and imagining what it would be like to get to know them like Bill has come to know Murphy. Keep the story going (I know you will.) Your writing is excellent.

I read this section frequently and have never once before read a story where I awaited the next chapter so fervently. I once had a lady friend like this, and I know the anticipation is the most important part. God, how I'd like to be with her again!