All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 10'

This story has built up the expectation and is celverly written to infuse emotions and feelings into a rather sexual and hot little read. Will it continue? I surely hope so!

Best yet. I just didn't believe the reason for not using a condom.

That was a little too tender for the situation. What made him so great? He never even picked up the pace. He should have built up to a bracing tempo and horsed her with serious gusto. I hope he redeems himself from this timorous showing.