All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 12'

Love this story...love this author. It seems though, there's a chapter missing between the way this one starts and the last chapter ending.

The story does skip around a bit and I've been delayed getting it finished. I understand the point about the lack of transition.

In Chap 11 Muriel remembers meeting Ben and Meg. That chapter ends with Muriel telling the brothers, Mark and Bill, to go back to their own place.

Back at their own place Chap 12 was happening, in my head anyway, concurrently.

That's not much help to those of you have reached the end of this chapter.

Sorry,

Turbidus

The first person focus changing with every paragraph is unusual and somewhat confusing, but it works to show what each character is thinking at the time. The story is extremely hot even though the MM sex does nothing for me and FF doesn't do much more.