All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 12'

by Kathi

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Still Good

I was a little concerned in a previous chapter regarding Bill's flash back to his fetish about his mother pissing. I thought the story is turning innto a "sick puppy" yarn. But it's good to see it's back on track.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Update

So Murphy has fallen for a guy who acts just like her hubby, except younger...hmmmm! Double Standard.

Why didn't Murphy scream out to Robert.."if you treat me like one of your whores, we may still have a marriage". Otherwise, I'm going to find someone who will...in fact I already have!!!

As for Bill, such nonsense...I'd forget the old bag especially hearing her yell at hubby...and concentrate on the mom with the two kids.

But that's me...

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