All Comments on 'On The Block Ch. 02'

I absolutely loved the first installment and am so glad you wrote a second - thank you!

I by far liked the first one more than the second part.

The only real part I liked about the second one was when he was thinking back to when he was back home with his family.

I'm not a fan of chains and piercings, and I saw little point to what was going on with him. I'm sure you can say that it he was just being used, and that everyone else was having their fun with him, and I don't really like that. Both people have to get something out of it, or I'm not interested.

In fact, he didn't like it so much that he thought about when he was back home. Then that leads me to wonder what on earth (or where ever he is) caused him to become this kind of slave. Don't you try not to break them so you can get a good price for them??

I would have liked it better if they hadn't put that thing on him that made it hurt when he came and that he had actually fucked the boys rubbing up on him.

I also know that you said that everyone in your story is 18 years of age, but I saw nothing but young 15 and 16 years old. Heck most of the time I saw them as being a year younger at 14 and I'm just talking about the boys who went around milking the chained guys. They sounded small in alot of ways.

Then there was that thing about how he was fucking his boy for years, and that he was just 18. So he must have started fucking him around his 16 or so. This sounds like some kind of think that everyone does in this world, I don't care, but it made me wonder for a bit. Did you want us to think that he didn't start fucking him until he was 18 or that you were only going to give us details about him being fucked from the time he was 18 with some small side note that it wasn't the first time?

People start having sex when they are 15, 16. I started having sex when I was 15. Why do people insist on posting stories about people once and only once they reach 18???

I'll still keep an eye out for the next chapter. It may have something in it that I'll like. Give in to a 15 year old wanting a fuck.

This chapter was a bit on the rough side, and over my comfort zone. Was also a bit of a strain to decipher the characters broken hick language.

Totally whack. Deliciously depraved daddy Dickinson. I couldn't stop reading no matter how bad it got. Kinda like rubbernecking at a car crash