All Comments on 'On the Bus'

by amaisugi

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hot! And set up well for more.

I think it was very well written and is going to be the source of a few fantasies for me.

The story is also poised well for more chapters. Please do write more.

- JT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Perfect Set-up

You've created a prefect set-up for a very interesting series of adventures for your heroine. I'm looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Good ob

don't stop now, I love it!

redptcredptcabout 17 years ago
Dirty trip to Uni!

Good story. Nice fantasy bus ride...well written and just good dirty fun.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Continuation

Please continue, this is brilliant!

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