All Comments on 'On the Dance Floor'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Erotic

A very good, erotic story and well written. My only complaint is she started in a skirt which became a dress, and finished off as a skirt again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Could be erotic.

But bareback sex with anyone, especially strangers, in this day and time is often just a death sentence. Wrap a condom on it and you reduce the chances of infection. You have to realize anyone willing to have sex with a stranger, has had sex with many others and dramatically increases the risk of AIDS and other not to pleasant aspects. Sex isnt worth a death sentence!

LalahLalahabout 16 years ago
Great Story

Great story, it got me hot thinking about having sex in a public club. I wonder if I could get away with it... My only complaint is that the sex scene was a little rushed after the slower start, I would have liked to get more descriptions as it was happening.

Oh, and don't mind the safe sex guy, he goes around every new story scolding characters who do not use a condom. I wonder if he's working for Trojan. ;) Personally I like fantasies of random strangers cumming into women.

Big-n-HardBig-n-Hardover 7 years ago
I loved the process of the story

The progression of their meeting to actually fucking on the dance floor was very well written. It builds you up to the climax. Just the way that A good sex story should. Well done,

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