All Comments on 'On the Desk with the Best'

I cannot believe the quality of the writing and how the story built- one of the best EVER!

Such good writing! Interesting characters, great build up, fantastic, sensitive sex. We need more!

Wonderful prose,porn and pleasure. Well done . Please keep writing.

Or young lust. Or a young girl's crush.

So beautifully described in language that drew me in to the feelings experienced by the first-person narrator. (Although "The static electricity from my woollen jumper made the hair in my pony tail stand on its end" evoked some interesting mental images).

Kyra_Dell, I envy you your ability with descriptive erotic language.

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Great work Kyra!!!! :)

This is great. You have a potential. I am speechless :)

So nice to read a story that's not just ridiculous porn-style sex. This is a well-written piece of erotic fiction. The final orgasm was a nice surprise.

Really beautifully written and a nice contrast to some of the more graphic offerings. Keep it up!

Well written. Made me want more.