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Big JayBig Jayover 10 years ago
Great first submission

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A FINE AND UN-REFINED PORN STORY

Lacks in subtle build up. Delivers on a must masturbate as we read this level!

Hit that thing again for us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Liked the Details

Your description of the blowjob captures the tension of almost cumming exactly. You write good wood! 5 stars

djripdjripover 1 year ago

Gang of 8, nice! One of my favorite numbers when it comes to gangs of girls!

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userJonny_Blueline@Jonny_Blueline
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Wow, it's been a long time since I've posted a story! I'm hopefully a week or 2 from posting the next chapter of On The Edge, so you should see it before the end of February. Thanks for your patience and hope you enjoy reading my efforts!

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