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by Ashson

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nit2gethernit2getherabout 9 years ago
WOW

That was GREAT. I loved the way you told the story. Made me believe it happened. Totally sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
cliches

too many stock phrases.................no originality except for the scene location

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You're writing in your sleep again.

At least this time you didn't forget your characters' names, but why bother with this when you've already written the same story dozens of times?

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