All Comments on 'On the Go Ch. 01'

Lovely... Hot... Arousing, 1st chapter!

Looking forward to the 2nd!

thank you

MDA

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Excellent as it is, with a unexpected twist at the end.

More would be nice.

Reminds me of Anais Nin's short stories; Little Birds.

I was there, right with you, the whole time, hoping for exactly the same ending.

Often writers don't expect to write sequels, and many seem to shun them, but I was pleasantly surprised to see this is but the first installment. I think I like Giselle a whole lot, Madeleine. Thank you. Celly

I look forward to chapter 2

You tease us by not going further...