by techsan
You really must get this published,it would be a best seller.
Folks these days probably cannot appreciate just how incredibly TOUGH it was to survive during the 19th century much less the frontier experience. And yet, the race survives and has fun. Looking forward to future installments.
I really enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to your next installment. Please don't feel the need for a tragedy. This has been a fun read without any sadness. So far. Keep your story like the first five chapters. Please. Again, I thank you for your efforts.
a very good series. However, life is not all a bed of roses as someone once said. Tension, as in: did I do that right, is she/he ok, sickness, injury, and so on are also part of real life. So is tragedy as in death, divorce, heartbreak, etc. Really good stories require some of those things too.
I am not a lover of long drawn out, multi chapter epics and usually reserve my comments to the last chapter. But after 5 chapters I must break my rule and compliment you on what has been an excellently written tale of epic proportion that you must keep going! Such a beautiful story, I can think of nothing that would improve it. Pete.
I have been spellbound by this series,my paternal grandfather was fom Canada and was killed in the first World War.I know he was of indian ancestors from the area what is now the northern part of the United States.I wonder what he would have said if he had been able to read this.The comment about how hard it was yet the "Race "still survives would have amused him I am sure.
Such attention to detail. This is a great story with just the right balance of sex and a storyline.
The spirit of Cochise lives in this tale,cant you sense the spirits of the indigenous peoples of your country when you read this great story.You may say how does an Englishman know,well take it from me I do,I spent a great deal of my early life in some of the wildest and more remote areas,big brash cities were not for me
I Admit to having jumped in to take a pick at this chapter. I picked and immidiatly got hooked: the right pace the right tone the right affect.You are in that world. Ok now I am moving back to start properly...
You have taken us on a history channel minds eye trip of some of the old west in the 1850's and 60's. It is so romantic and the information only makes it all so much more intense. I truly feel like I see every word unfold before me like I am there.<P>
Calling a beer of that era a cold one is a slip I believe. Unless they are making and keging it in a dugout ice house.<P>I do so thank you for this great entertainment.<P>PT