All Comments on 'On the Loveseat Ch. 12'

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OnedragonOnedragonover 6 years agoAuthor
Length

I know this chapter is very long. I wanted to have the whole day in a single chapter, and Saturday was an eventful day for the characters. Overwhelming concensus was for longer chapters. This will be the longest of any chapter if that alleviates any readers concerns. I will aim for 7 or 8 pages from now on.

crawler101crawler101over 6 years ago
put babies in them

thats Always a nice expression of love, lust and taboo. ;)

great story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great writing

I hate when cum get wasted in stories on towls or whatever. Part of the reason this series is so good is all the cum swallowing and obsession. 👍👍👍

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fantastic

Loved it all, wife and I love how it isn't all sex and that there's a story going aswell, we would love for the grandmother to get in on the fun if that's possible? The length of the chapter is just right please please keep writing far the best stories on here now

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
help me

post a link of a picture of this red dress that mom worn. and the skirt too.. i cant imagine it exist or restaurant dinner appeal

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story

Love the series. I think it's time to get the ladies munching each others rugs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
very good

Are there Jeremy's friends to join?

Perhaps another person (man) to join the party.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
NO SWORDFIGHTS!!!

Plz don't bring another man in. It would ruin the harem vibe of the story and cheapen it! It was bad enough in your orgy story when the mother pulled off of her son's cock to go suck off the neighbor. That turned me off so fast my boner died faster than ever before.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
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Mom, aunt, strapon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
When's the next part

Could you please say when your be posting the next part please

OnedragonOnedragonover 6 years agoAuthor
Waiting

It's been submitted, waiting on approval and posting. Thanks for your interest!

Geisha1Geisha1about 6 years ago
Brilliant.

Unbelievably sexy, erotic. Wow. Wow.

jhenderson7606jhenderson7606over 5 years ago
Comment on Ch. 10

FAN-FRIGGING-FANTASTIC!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Outstanding

My wife and I loved it totally

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