All Comments on 'On the Loveseat Ch. 15'

5 stars. Please keep it going!!

Love these 2 characters relationship and dynamics. Hope you keep it going. Always in anticipation for the next ..

Another excellent chapter!

Please continue!

Far,far too long.

if more than 2 or 3 chapters, end it, make another story.

let the dad find out ..make it tight ,cuckold and spicy love.

dad agrees and finally their life change .

make mom and son enjoy their affair with dads approval...

A lil bit more spanking and rough sex with both.

Great chapter and awesome story. Absolutely fantastic. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the amazing work.

You have done a great job of developing your characters in this story. Thankfully, you have kept the focus on the mom and son and not brought other male lovers into the picture. That always ruins it for me. This is a mom/son love/sex story. You still have a lot of material to work with here. He still has all summer before it has to end and a lot of adventures to complete with mom and aunt. I am so hoping you have figured out a happy ending to this. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Could you please show more of the rough and red ass spanking fucking with Jess just like in an earlier (Rougher would be great)

BDSM and exhibitionism would be more than appreciated. Keep up the awesome work.

Great series so far. I recommend including other male lovers for the mother and aunt, just to piss off some of the commenters. That is all.

But must be getting close to hubbie being suspicious and moving to category Loving Wives. A nice bit of BTB would finish the saga nicely. Time for him to gain some character.

Really dig the direction you are heading towards. Realistic pacing, realistic dialogues and a perfect balance between passion and raw sex. Please ignore the bdsm or more male lovers crap comments from the weirdos. That would totally kill the character and story development so far. For me, love and deep feelings are the only bridge characters can cross into incest. These crazy fuckfest quick jerk stories can be found elsewhere. That is not what your story represents. Thanks for taking the time, one of the best reads on here in a long time. Keep up the good work, much love from Germany

I won't say that I have not read a story line like this but man what an awesome writer you are...i haven't thought that you can increase your vocabulary by reading sex stories.. You are a scholar man...as the story starts logically that Jeremy can not fuck day and night it was one of the logical story but man even the dumbest peron will konw what's happening between his wife and son or the deaf can say the difference between banging a cunt or a box...so either join daddy or just say he knows and he let it be..try to be more logical...it's kind of boring now with only Jeremy and jenny...well its your story and you know how to shape it

Don't forget not to neglect the aunt she is still part of the story I would love to have two sexy woman fighting for my cock lol

its getting boring dude, 3 chapters of the same. no story or character development and tying moms tubes will hinder any future development you could have put in...sigh.

where is aunty?

ill keep reading the continuation of the story, but it will be with less enthusiasme. this could have been so much more, you had a good story going. sigh again

its still a great read - you're a talented writer - BUT the story is getting old. i'm sure if you keep to this repetitive story line the ratings and readers will drop and drop - it just becoming monotonous. You are probably like many writers - you have a great story with good characters - and don't want it to end. but it needs a change-up. either they need to get caught - with circumstances that may make the story VERY unpleasant - or you need to find a positive way to move it along. for example, the waitress at the restaurant could come back to the story - maybe she works at the golf club - and Jeremy falls for her. Then you could work out the sexy details of how mom, jeremy and the waitress work it out.

Or,the story could fast forward to college, he finds a woman, and brings her home to mom and then more escapades. YOU'RE the writer - and a great one at that - but lets get this story moving!!!!! (and not to be pushy, but soon too!!!) and i agree with almost all the prior comments - happy endings preferred!!!

AND THANKS for the great read so far.

What once was an entertaining story has become one dimensional and predictable. I hope you have new ideas for future chapters. And as previous commenters have asked, where is Aunt Judy?

The day of reckoning must surely be close at hand....

I think this should end already. Like a threesome ending with mom and aunt, dad leaves. Happy. Just don't add anymore male characters in the story because we came here for the incest.

This is such a fantastic story!! Absolutely perfect!! The way the mom has become so open with the relationship, almost at the cost of everything else is superb. Keep writing your story and don’t listen to any of this negativity. Awesome work!!

awaiting for your continuation....

How long for the next part ????

The next few chapters will be coming in short order. I need to coordinate major upcoming events so am writing a large chunk of story to get to that point.

For those complaing of sameness, this has been somewhat intentional to show how even the best of situations can become bland. And to counterpoint those upcoming events. I promise things are going to get more than interesting soon. Just a few more chapters.

Also there will be an ending.

Please don't stop writing, your one of the few good writers on here now who's story's are a pleasure to read again and again I hope you decide to use the same characters in different story's and plan to o out with a bang. I also hope that a few more is 3 or 4 parts to come

How about adding in the waitres and store clerk

And 17 will be right behind it!

here is a suggestion: mom should reminisce about how Jeremy was as a baby or a kid during their naughty encounters (that's natural for moms to think back to when their kids were young). Also im surprised that mom hasn't commented about Jeremy's seed , its always just the casual "oh give me your cum". It would be better if she thought about the significance of Jeremy's sperm. As when he comes in her pussy his swimmers are literally trying to swim and fertilize her egg to no avail, but that is their goal. When she swallows it, she is literally swallowing her sons babies. It would be nice if that dynamic was discussed between them.

How Justin doesn't even suspect anything is going on with his wife is unbelievable. She gets creamed twice by her son-who, at 18, is spewing amazing amounts of come-and hubby is none the wiser. Even with some clean up, she must smell like serious sex. Meanwhile, the close call keep getting closer.....

I don't know how you're able to introduce this degree of realism in the story and the characters, but I guess that's the mark of a great writer.

I like the story so far, but there are a lot of inconsistencies.

What ha pend to the dirty talk during blowjobs? during the first few chapters they did it a lot.

Also she has seen him cum, during the threesome with her sister he came on their faces.

Also why don't they do anal if she is on her period?

The scorched-earth policy of tying Mom’s tubes was a poor choice. Shutting down completely the kinky risk of impregnation threw away creative opportunities of describing how Mom and son try to avoid as best they can their fertility conundrum. Timing their sex for only “safe” periods, Jeremy taking other holes (both Mom’s and other women, namely Aunt), alternatives to vaginal sex, etc. The anticipation to when they can consummate their intercourse would help with buildup and pacing, to where in one session the couple may even throw caution to the wind and give in to lust (son ejaculates into Mom during her ovulation, with or without her encouragement). Then the couple would have to live with the repercussions or remedy it with the usual ex-post facto contraceptives. Either way, the “easy-out“ tied tubes solution you chose sadly meant all these creative opportunities were lost...