All Comments on 'On the Road Again Pt. 02'

Keep it coming. This is as funny as it is entertaining. Good work.

I've waited for this sequel of On The Road Again, but it's a kinda dissapointment. While the firt story were very well written and intensely well built, the sequel is a turn-off and randomly developed. I think this story shouldn't be lited on " Romance" anymore, but more to nonconsent/reluctance or erotic or mature, instead.

L E T D O W N

2 star

Enjoyed the story, however neither of them should have been in the romance category.

I am enjoying this so far But there were a couple of directions in part one that you seem to have abandoned . I wish you had followed up with the college girl without adding the daughter as a sex interest, the wife also seems to skate totally after 20 years of just considering herself. Now with the husband becoming just like the wife, there is no high ground for him to assume. I guess I expected some conventional morality in a romance category story.

None of this is major criticism. This IS Fiction and a fun read and who knows where you could end........except you!

Ed

The start of this one seemed a bit odd but once it got going it was very, very good. Thank you and please keep writing.

The first part was quite nice, but in the second part the author fell into the trap that most authos here, instead of trying to develope the characters, he piles up bodies, daughter, friend, random stranger, i was waiting for a martian girl orphaned and raised up on some moon of Jupiter to pop up after hearing how the hero was good in bed, it got that ridiculously stupid, LOL

A disappointment, u should have wrapped up the first part with jessica and called it a day

on one hand.

this story is Well Written , Engaging , Entertaining & Delighfully Naughty.

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on the other hand.

it just does not fit in the Romance Category

actually considering the topics the Author touches upon.

LW / Mature / incest / erotic couplings (so far)

unless they add a category for "boys own" crazy rollercoaster , mad spiral , runaway train .. psychedelic middle aged mans wet dream .. i am not sure really where this story does fit ... perhaps " if " there is more chapters to look forward to .. then the correct home would be Novels/Novellas.

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however .. i did enjoy the tale

and voted it a worthy 5 stars

Good story why didn't you finish it?????

So out of the blue this story comes to a halt and the reader is left wondering what happened. Literotica is the land of unfinished stories.

Probably won't happen, but a pt. 03 would really be welcome...