All Comments on 'On The Road Ch. 06'

by OzmanA

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That was...boring.

No angst, no chemistry and honestly, I gave up trying to figure out who was who. Everyone was interchangeable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Just another day at the zoo, watching the animals fuck.

Thank you for a really exciting jackoff story. Don't tell my mother.

impo_61impo_61over 8 years ago
As I said in part 5...

As I said in part 5: "This story seems magic...why? Because characters seem to grow in it, like grass!!! And they show up already naked and fucking!!! No feelings in it...It seems an international zombies bacchanal!!! Most of the times they fuck and don't remember!" and in this part it's still true: "Ronnie and Rob emerged from below, she in a gold, stretch, thong monokini and he in blue, lycra Speedo bathers. A few minutes later another, younger couple came up, then a somewhat older one. These were Zac and Tina and Ned and Stephanie respectively...1*

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