All Comments on 'On The Road to Dublin Pt. 01'

That was great. Your writing draws such a perfect picture making it so real. You are a wonderful writer and I really hope you send more along.

What a great story. I'm so wet right now I can barely stand it.

what an excellent piece of writing. i'm sure there's more wheere this came from ! we deserve a second chapter of this adventure ! many many thanks. !

If you are really an accountant you should change your profession! The best story I have read on Literotica in years. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Love the story! Wish this were my wife! I would love to see her take the stage and dance and strip!

Hot. Got me hard and wanting

Thanks for a very good and sexy read

More please

Joe

Great start!

Very good, very good indeed. Made me wet and oh so horny. Keep it up, can't wait for chapter 2. xoxo Annette

That was a HOT story! Bring on the next chapter

Well written, with a great story line that will appeal to men and women. Kept me right through. Loved it and want the next. Thanks

Totally loved this. Looking forward to future stories from you -

You just entered my favorite authors list. Very good story telling, felt like I was there.

Keep the good work, and disregard those of pea brain attitude.

Tks.

I don't know how you could do better but please do more.

An excellent account of a great adventure

Brought back memories of MY first striptease, remember telling people: It was better than a fuck! Changed my life...

Can't wait to read the next chapter

It's a well worn theme, but beautifully executed here. I felt the husband was slightly too accepting of the way his marriage had been risked without any consultation. His character became too one dimensional, too "I'm okay with anything at all" to be totally believable to me, so four rather than five stars.

Looking forward to the next instalment, and hoping the storyline stays in exhibitionist / voyeur territory and steers clear of the 'willing cuckold' genre.

I haven't read part 2 yet, but what a part 1!!! I can't believe this is the first story you have ever written. Your story was great. Well written and had great flow. Hubby is a very generous and forgiving man. Lynne is a naughty girl. Personally, I want to meet the "bouncer."

Your writing and descriptive style made this reader feel as if she were right there with your characters. I should wait until tomorrow to read part 2, but I can't. Another late night reading erotica. Thank you.

not sure a real wife makes all that jump in one afternoon

And to deliberately defile it is beyond comprehension. Poor stupid sick cuck. I can't wait til one of the troglodytes he's exposed her to, decides to take him out of the picture. Couldn't happen to a stupider fuck.

I can't believe you wrote "Flight Instructor"!

And it went in a hurry. Not badly written, but I found it totally implausible and therefore not a good read.

So where is this going, will she now become a whore? Does the husband have the balls to stop her . Will he end this farce of a marriage.

I thought the writing style was very good but the Husband was too accepting of what the wife did and I dislike Cuck stories which this one starts bordering upon.

Oh, because some women have dignity and self-respect, and define themselves, rather than being defined by their husbands, or, in this case, her live in wimp. They both are sluts, and deserve whatever happens to them, and their marriage. Adultery and divorce in a few months, or life long slutting? Who cares? Watching stupid people fuck up their lives and their marriages is not erotic nor interesting.

Stars for the writing. Arrivederci marriage! As it reads now, Lynne is going to make him a cuckold. Cheers!

You lost me right at the beginning of this story....like any husband would leave his wife in a strip joint for the day and evening...alone yet!! She is supposed to be conservative...you made a liar of yourself right away. She is a slut...must of been one for quite awhile because she knows the in's and out's like a time worn hooker would! And of course we have the closet cuck who is about to come out!! The story is well written but the whole premise is just too far fetched for me to bother reading any further....He's a cuck and she's a slut..and they both love each other to death!!! Hahaha

There goes my thoughts that this author is equipped with a penis.

enough said. TK

This must be a 'Hand Christian Anderson fairy story, it was so far fetched, he was a stupid wimp, she was worse than a prostitute, most of them sadly do it for money, because they are desperate, she was just an whore.