All Comments on 'On the Run'

The sad fact is this a rare breed of story. Rarer still since way too many of its kind have the shemale in question being crazy or abusive. Its good to see someone revisiting this hybrid and them doing it with the love they should have for each other in mind. I also loved that you made it mutual with both having a turn as top. Are you going to do a story with the mom as a shemale or perhaps a sister. Please say yes :)

hope to see more and was wondering if mom could take her new daughter shopping and maybe get a man involved too. A nice man.

Touching, sexy, erotic, and very real.

Love this and hope there are more

...Subject to make work, and you've made it so tender, with so much empathy, you are an inspired author! Thank you for sharing this absolutely incredible story, and please write more, I'll read it anytime you find you have the time to write it!

You have taken a theme that could have been nothing less than tragic and by sensitivity and skillful writing turned it into a true love story.

Well done.

You certainly know how to tug on the heart strings. I found myself really rooting for them. Nicely done.

I am new to this site and the joy of spending time with (or even communicating with) a TG girl is still but a fantasy to me. I shall now enjoy your story again. David

OMG This is an very nice story. I loved it from begin till the end. I hope you can/will write an sequel to this story? Maybe one about how the mother and girl will be found by Liz the girlfriend of Diana. And how the 3 lived together without any troubles? Maybe about how the mother is spoken free after an lawsuit has made clear what happened? And all kind of old bruises on the body of Deana made it clear also? How Liz and the mother find an female lawyer ho helps her and be cums her lover ? Love to read it sometimes.

Yes can we please here more, as someone who is Transgender I would like to see Liz come into the story & Diana deciding that she does want her surgery to become a lesbian lover for Liz & possibly her mother, but thats just how I would continue

what a great story too bad it ended with one chapter

A bit weird but in history it was the same thing what was done

just found this story , thank you. i will read part 2.

Interesting to say the least !!!!!! write on !!!!

loved it