All Comments on 'On the Subway'

by CyanideT

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
interesting !

Have to wonder if you have been fucked on a train like this .........well written and got me hard ! Bet this 'victim' wants to be fucked again !

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More, please!!

This was absolutely delicious!!!!!! Your writing is wonderful.

married_but_curiousmarried_but_curiousabout 5 years ago
Really hot

I'd like to read the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
very hot

although it sound like hell, I have fantasized about something like this..

thanks

FnfireFnfireover 3 years ago
Hot, love this kind of fantasy

Always fantasize about non con, being taken like this even though Ive never been with a guy. Keep up the good work!

timytimyabout 1 year ago

Please write a sequal to this

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