All Comments on 'On The Train'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A great little story

which brought back memories of my childhood with those train carriages without a corridor - that was a long time ago although you can still find them on preservation railways still being pulled by a steam train. Loved it - hope there is more to follow when they continue their escapades.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
hot

Really Hot, but you could have left out the spanking and added in a good fucking doggie style. I don't like seeing pain inflicted for someone's gratification, it seems to dirty a beautiful act.

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