All Comments on 'On Thin Ice Ch. 01'

i cant wait for something to happen between them...theres so much tension! yum :)

I seriously LOVE your stories! I come to your page everyday hoping for a new story and this new one doesn't disappoint!!! Thank you for writing about a certain hot Devils player! He is one of my favorites!!

LOVE your stories! Can't wait for the next chapter

This was definitely worth waiting for. I'm glad things are balancing out for you and it's nice to see you haven't lost your touch in creating immediately well-rounded characters.

and writing just as fabulously as ever!

Great first chapter Mugsy! Totally adore Meg and Zane and can't wait to read more!

Well, you already know I love it. :) It's a great set up, though. Meg and Zane are fun characters, and the apartment scam was a novel way to get them together. I don't even mind it's the Devils. I mean, they're in North Jersey, after all. ;)

I looovee it...i love all...great chapter...thanks to share it with us...

Looks like another one of your wonderful adventures through the world of love via the hockey rink. I love the twist of emotions experienced by both characters.

I'm so excited that you are writing another Ice story. Can't wait to see what happens!

I'm counting down the days to the start of the season. I have re-read your stories and love them all. Your talent at storytelling is excellent. I love all your works. Thank you for sharing these wonderful pieces of art.

I've read all your stories, and haven't found one i didnt like...and i'm in tennessee and i dont even think we have hockey so i dont watch lol but your stories are awesome! and i love stories about best friends it just warms my heart

beginning! Liking the tension between your two main characters... and so hoping he caves first and tells her how he feels.

Love your stories

Loved it! By the way....Tennessee does have hockey! Nashville Preds!

I love all your stories and keep a check out for new ones from you all the time, cant wait for more. Love the way you make them work for the love and feelings and how you always keep us hungery for more.

I was SOOOO happy to see a new hockey story from you! Love it! My heart broke a little at the end! I hope either they give into their desires quickly, or that you'll write super fast, because I hate waiting! =)

another story!!! i love you stories. please please make write the next chapter fast!! as in....now!!! :) can't wait.... :)

Great to see another in the series. This first installment is particularly interesting; tight writing and interesting characters. Keep up the good work and give us another chapter soon

your hiatus isn't working out. Lol! Sorry Mugsy, but I feel like cheering, I'm so excited. Another excellent story. I like that they know each other so well but are blind to all the signs. Can't wait for them to take it to the next level. I'm going to be shameless and beg for more. Please, please, please! I can't wait for the next chapter! lol! Seriously, can't wait for more! Thanks for writing.

Can't say I'm unhappy that you interrupted your hiatus. (HA!) Enjoyed this one and looking forward to reading it as it unfolds. Thanks for a new story line. :)

the break from writing doesn't seem to be working out so well, can only say i'm happy about that because that means we get another gem to read.

childhood friends, when is the next chapter here?

Another Ice story is exactly what I need right now! So glad you are writing these. The first chapter is great!

I am loving this story.. Can not wait for the next installment!!

Thans for another great story! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter expectantly!!

I am so so happy to see you have a new story! I already love Zane and Meg and can't wait to see what happens next.

*singing as I do a little dance* A female hockey player...check, long time best friends....check, "wrestling" matches and rolling around on the floor tickling each other....check

I am a very happy woman right now! Thank you so very very much Mugsy!

your stories are the best :)

That was such an amazing start! I can't wait for more.

14. On Thin Ice Ch.2 (ZP and Meg):

http://www.literotica.com/s/on-thin-ice-ch-02