All Comments on 'On Your Knees, Boys'

Well written and hot!

Great start, now get to work and tell us more. A hard throbbing starter with a big squirt at the end. You are good.

Great story, made my little thing so stiff.

Quite a few women have a desire to see their man in m/m action. In the right situation it is not that difficult to get guys to do it.

I have had the joy of MFM 3somes, but none as hot as that.. I guess I can only dream.

In my book--rather in my mind--there is nothing more erotic than a woman lead bi threesome encounter. My motto is: what is good for the goose is good for the gander. Women do bi all the time for the pleasure of man. I would love to put on a show with another man for the pleasure of a woman.

My name is Cassie so this helped me out a lot

Very well written, believable dialogue, and well paced. Plan on reading more of your work.

KEEP WRITTING, you're good!

Mirrors my dreams. I want my wife to direct the action when I suck my first cock. Very hot - Thanks

I would love to do this with my jerk off buddy! It would have been better with some flesh light toys involved though. The wife could have sucked there cock heads as the popped out of the end of the flesh light quick shots! That is hot. Also a little ball massage from the wife. Other than that a real squirter! Love to jerk to this! Will

More women need to follow suit. Take charge of the situation and turn it to your advantage. Men will follow. They like to be led.

Very hot story. Loved the way the woman took charge. Wish I go play that out with my wife & guy friend!