All Comments on 'Once Upon a War Ch. 07'

Another great chapter I look forward to your next posting.

B-o-r-i-n-g and sooooooooooooooooooooo repetitious.

Is this series ever going to end?

You can end it any time you want -- just stop reading. I'm surprised you read it this far. I try to mix it up as much as I can, but there are only so many things people can do sexually. The next chapter should do that. To answer the question, I hope to wrap it up in two more chapters, no guarantees because I need to span 20 years. I definitely have an ending in mind. For those who like the series, hang in there and thanks.

Just a secret for you guys. I'm trying to please the ladies with my writing, so you may not find it as action packed as you may want. Sorry, that's just the way it is.

Great Read... Keep the chapters coming!

This is a great read!! Kudos!! I read the whole series over the past few days and loved it! I noticed that it's been a while since the last chapter update. Could another chapter be coming soon?

Keep up the great work!! I will be checking back!!

The next chapter is almost done. Then it will need editing.

Five Stars. Great read.

are you going to write anymore of these stories they are really good and interesting.

Thank you for your service and I enjoyed your story.

I got so wrapped up in it that I forgot what were the few suggestions that I had.

You do need to proof read more diligently though. Most mistakes are simple typos and repetitions.

Where is chapter 8 (I suspect the story closer), it's been 7yrs?

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Other than the overly detailed sex the story base is captivating.

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4*, Hooyah, salutes from a Vietnam-Vet, USN-E7 selectee in 8.