All Comments on 'One Big Happy Family Ch. 01'

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Kiltie01Kiltie01about 7 years ago
Loved the idea if a little short

Great start to which I hope will mean more chapters

bobenjoys183bobenjoys183about 7 years ago
Great start

Yes, need more chapters to this story. Nice to get mom involved too. Look forward to the next event.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great start

This is a great start to your series. I hope this continues. Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
OK

Pretty good start, few grammer issues and wrong word here n there. Don't depend on spill cheque to always give you the write word.

( He slide his index finger between her pussy lips ) slid......

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 7 years ago
Beautiful love story

Great how single event can lead to uninhibited love

Spanner1962Spanner1962about 7 years ago
Great story

So well written ! I was immediately turned on , more please !!

prop69prop69almost 5 years ago
Awesome story

Wish I had a daughter like her.

Can't wait for another Episode.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Thanks so much for the father -Daughter cum as I am spent now thanks to you!!

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