All Comments on 'One Blade of Grass'

Possibly the worst story on the site.

I wish I could give it no stars.

What a lovely celebration of skankdom. Kudos.

Gaia always was a whore, spreading her legs for any two-bit cosmic event that showed.

Your "One Blade of Grass" story was brilliant. I laughed, long and hard, until I was wheezing at one point. It's clever, but, more than that, it also has moments of real depth, true profundity sprinkled in along the ridiculousness of the dialogue, and the outrageousness of the scenes.

It was highly unusual, and I mean that in the best possible way. It will get burned, and burned badly, but not by me. I thought it was stellar. Truly. It was daring and grotesque and everything that exploratory, incendiary writing is supposed to be. I loved it.

...but, yer lucky even to get a four because

YOU CALLED A MARINE "SOLDIER".

Never call a Marine "soldier". "Soldiers" are army pukes!

*I* didn't call the Gyrene a 'soldier' -- the skank did. *I* know better. My USMC bro-in-law made certain of that.

Now that that's cleared up, you can hit the FAVORITES buttons. Thanks!