All Comments on 'One Cage to Another Pt. 02'

Might want to add a little detail to the sexy scene at the end, good but with maybe an explanation of how his fingers inside her moved? Just something to draw it out

JC

That is good advice. :) Honest, I wrote the whole evening out in one go, but decided to submit it in parts because it was over 5,000 words and that seemed like a lot (to me) for sexy reading. But since I'm doing it that way, I can go back through and add more detail, like you suggested, to each part!