All Comments on 'One Charming Night'

My first lover was a dancer whom I met at a workout club. So genle was your description of your first taste of a woman, so genuine and yes, hot as hell. My first taste of my dancer, Jane, is unforgettable. Fortunately, we continue to taste the goddess in each other in mutual woman to woman adoration six years later. I wait all day for a taste of her pussy, as she does mine. My little pussy devotee is licking my juices from my pussy as I write, so it's my turn. Love, Sandy

This is really delicious -- one of the best and tenderest I have read for ages.

story of exploration, and the wonder and joy that comes from that exploration. So many writers and readers alike, seem unable to grasp the simpe fact that tender and gentle can be sexxxy as hell, and just as hot as hard fast sex. A delightful, delicious read. Thank you. I look forward to more.

nicely evoked sentiments, and moving story, but narrative cliches were not always avoided. by delving more into what they were to render you might give an even more rewarding text

one of the best written pices of work i have read in a long while it does the title justice to the upmost

So sweet and tender and that's the best way to experience woman to woman love. Please write more!

Erotica personified!!!

If the comments of 9-15-05 were incorporated (I agree with them to some extent) this might be the absolute best Lesbian story in the history of Literotica. As it is, it's really, really good. Wish the author had submitted additional work; there's still time.